1. I would have "injected" more dynamism in terms of the specific
differences between Montaigne/Austen's respective rhetoric/perspectives
on relevant topics (more on subjectivity or universal relativity of
society's mental porthole) and more so touch upon (with more concrete
examples of course) the similarities of said Author's view of their
society's seemingly unbalanced or inappropriate set of priorities
(ultimately weaving it to our own time's materialistic predilections :).
2. What occurred to me after? to tell you the truth i was
completely prepared to complete the essay while in class and already had
my set of key-points to tackle and would compose my essay.
3.
The interruption allowed a bit of reprieve/ further thought planning but
aside from that it utterly ruined my ability to not ultimately rush the
quality/content of my essay. But i feel that i salvaged/selected the
most prominent of my ideas in the end. Wish i had more time :P
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