Tuesday, January 29, 2013

"WHAT'S THE STORY?"

Why did Charles Dickens write the novel you're reading/reviewing? What in your analysis of literary techniques led you to this conclusion? (Make sure to include textual support illustrating Dickens' use of at least three techniques we've studied/discussed this year.)
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Great Expectations

Charles Dickens
  • Hyperbole/Monologue: "And now, because my mind was not confused a thousandfold before, I complicated its confusion fifty thousand-fold, by having states and seasons when I was clear that Biddy was immeasurably better than Estella, and that the plain honest working life to which I was born, had nothing in it to be ashamed of, but offered me sufficient means of self-respect and happiness."
  • Imagery/Metaphor: "For an hour or more, I remained too stunned to think; and it was not until I began to think, that I began fully to know how wrecked I was, and how the ship in which I had sailed was gone to pieces."
  •  Monologue/simile:"My sister's bringing up had made me sensitive. In the little world in which children have their existence whosoever brings them up, there is nothing so finely perceived and so finely felt, as injustice. It may be only small injustice that the child can be exposed to; but the child is small, and its world is small, and its rocking-horse stands as many hands high, according to scale, as a big-boned Irish hunter."
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With our lecture in class, aid of the above quotations , as well as my personal reading thus far, Charles Dickens Great Expectations its contemplative pacing, reflective tone indeed imbued his works (as any master of the written word) with a plethora of themes, underlying connotations, layers. Deriving from the eponymous title, Great Expectations chronicles the bilsdungroman, coming age tale of a young, naive, boy by the name of "Pip" and his own expectations as he ambles thru childhood in an adult world. Although i haven't as of yet completed my reading of Great Expectations, the deliberation upon Pip's perspicacity, his maturation and development as a character clearly delineates the author's (never so presumptuous to absolutely know what another individual has thought however) purpose  whilst writing the novel. The (granted-marginally) hyperbolic monologue of quote 1 (with "...the plain honest working life to which I was born, had nothing in it to be ashamed of, but offered me sufficient means of self-respect and happiness.") blatantly supports Dickens' desire to not only depict his character Pip's realization of reality, but so to his purpose to detail his maturation, shifting from a naive perspective to more rationalistic, realistic, expectations rather than the lofty innocence common to children. Quote two's vivid imagery/metaphor likening Pip's recent station in life/perspective to the marshland ships he once witnessed in younger days so too supports this idea of Dickens' forcing Pip to confront himself, and again realign his reality, expectations on life beyond his once simpler view. Quote three is the piece de resistance upon the connotative cake, Dickens' cementing his purpose here with  Pip's rumination on his days raised as a child, his once simpler, untainted perspective, with great expectations. Charles Dickens Great Expectations, thru Pip, seeks as all bilsdungroman to depict the maturation, evolution of a child across the oftentimes tumultuous trek of adult hood. As the above excerpts comment, Dickens sought to achieve this as well as portray the shift of perspectives and expectations from that of an innocent, naive child to an arguably more realistic, adult world view. Yet Great Expectations greatest (one that I'm expecting as i near book completion) feat is the lack of cynicism present in Pip even as the world juts its jaded fangs, piercing his peter pan like reality. He remains stalwart in his positivity thick and thru even when at times he may falter, his reliance upon personal morality, his persistence to sustain a kinder behavior, relationship with the harsh real-world speaks to what i believe Dickens ultimate impetus for writing this novel: to mature in to adulthood while always remaining a child (to some extent), always endeavoring to perceive life/reality more positively, always have great expectations.

Monday, January 28, 2013

DICKENS MAP

 QUESTIONS

 Please describe...

1) Your reading schedule to complete your reading/review of the book by Monday, February 4;

2) List five AP questions (with source URLs) that you intend to be able to answer by the time you finish

3) How you think you should be tested on these ideas, and/or how you intend to demonstrate your expertise on your blog.
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1. I will continue my reading regiment of 20-40 pages, but increase the frequency now by reading nightly. This should allow me more than adequate time to complete the novel by Feb. 4th as I am already over one third complete.

2. Courtesy of (primarily) past AP lit students, of our school and other's with respective blogs.
  •   Is Pip happy that he is given the opportunity to kiss the beautiful Estelle? Why or why not? (http://jpdrhsenglitcomp.blogspot.com/2012/02/great-expectations-study-questions.html)
  •  How does Estelle behave towards Pip? What is her disposition, character motive towards the main protagonist? (http://jpdrhsenglitcomp.blogspot.com/2012/02/great-expectations-study-questions.html)
  •  What does it mean that Pip has been raised "by hand"? (http://hswrhsenglitcomp.blogspot.com/2012/02/great-expectations-questions-and.html)
  •  How does Estella criticize Pip, and what does his reaction to her criticism reveal about Pip?
    (http://hswrhsenglitcomp.blogspot.com/2012/02/great-expectations-questions-and.html)
3.  I would, of course, rather avoid traditional testing as we are in a non-traditional, asymmetrical, class (in term of our more..."progressive" education style) as is but a tag along questionnaire to say one of our weekly vocab quizzes one day would be acceptable in my eyes (though proper warning for ample study time should always be exercised :).

Sunday, January 27, 2013

Spring Literature Analysis #1: Ender's Game by Orson Scott Card



Ender’s Game
by Orson Scott Card 


“In the end, really…what is more pure, more cruel than a child?”

Literature Analysis
by Hayden Robel


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GENERAL_QUESTIONS_

1. Briefly summarize the plot of the novel you read, and explain how the narrative fulfills the author's purpose (based on your well-informed interpretation of same).

2. Succinctly describe the theme of the novel. Avoid clichés.

3. Describe the author's tone. Include a minimum of three excerpts that illustrate your point(s).

4. Describe a minimum of ten literary elements/techniques you observed that strengthened your understanding of the author's purpose, the text's theme and/or your sense of the tone. For each, please include textual support to help illustrate the point for your readers. (Please include edition and page numbers for easy reference.)

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1. In the distant, unidentified, future, mankind wages a relentless war against a hostile alien “arthropod” (insects) species colloquially titled the “Buggers”. Teetering on the edge of collapse, humanity begins a program recruiting exceptionally intelligent/ “gifted” children (kids genetically selected/vetted to be imbued with strategic/instinctual military intelligence rivaling that of history’s greatest strategists) in order to combat the alien threat. This is where Ender Wiggin, a six year old introvert/precocious child, (the Third candidate) our protagonist emerges. Recruited into the program for his “ruthless/unprecedented strategic rationale” (though Ender despises violence and is in fact frightened by what he does/is capable of) Ender is enrolled in the “Battle Academy” where he is confronted not only by fellow hostile students but so to confronting his own inner turmoil, unable to connect fully with others, anyone at all. That is until Alai, a stubborn but supportive student, becomes Ender’s first and (one of his only) true friends. By the end of the novel Ender is beguiled into commanding a “simulation” where he assaults the “bugger” home colony but it is ultimately revealed he was in fact actually commanding over his fellow students in a genuine war effort. Though victory was hard-won, many of his friends were killed by his self-described “pathetic incompetence” including Alai. Left with a translated transmission from the nearly extinct Bugger race, the alien species does not blame Ender for his genocide, entrusting him with a cocoon a pupa, the last viable of the species. Ender, able to protect the egg or destroy it, destroy an entire species, ends the novel (connoting Orson Scott Card’s penultimate theme for the work) wondering who truly his enemy was, the alien buggers or, himself, man.

2. As the introductory quote (a working quote from my novel) comments, In the end…really…What is more pure and cruel than a child? From deception, the manipulation of children, warfare to introspective self-isolation there are a plethora of themes underlying concurrently within Ender’s Game, but none so prominent as the following. Throughout the novel Ender is frequently attacked by his fellow students (children ages 5-14) both verbally and physically (Even his own brother, Peter, tries to kill/torture him on more than one occasion). Orson Scott Card’s Ender’s Game, like the Legendary Lord of the Flies, employs children as a metaphor for humanity at large, the morality, duality, capacity for “good” or “evil” that every human being innately possesses. The end of the novel, where in Ender can either protect and attempt to propagate, rebuild the alien species he essentially exterminated, or destroy the egg, destroying any chance of the species survival, connotes this idea of duality perfectly. Calling in to question another theme, who really was his enemy our enemy? What is an enemy, really? Is it some opposing entity, force, or is it something else? Indefinable or defined, informed, by someone else’s declaration, or is it informed by our own perspicacity? Is the enemy, as Ender ruminates, really…ourselves?

3.
·        “Human beings are free except when humanity needs them.”

·        “Ender knew the unspoken rules of manly warfare, even though he was only six. It was forbidden to strike the opponent who lay helpless on the ground; only an animal would do that.”

·        “They couldn't beat him in the battleroom, and knew it – so instead they would attack him where it was safe, where he was not a giant but just a little boy.”
Orson Scott Card (OSC as I will begin abbreviating) is a master of the written craft, the tone of Ender’s Game in particular depicting his talent. Marauding with a sense of impending dread, the contrastingly sterile setting of the future, the sterilized diction utilized by OSC pervades and punctuates the entirety of the work. Whether it be the dire situation of humanity as it wages a war for survival, or the manipulating alternate agendas of Ender’s adult commanders or even fellow rivaling students, the tone of Ender’s Game can only be described as urgent, tense, oppressed as Ender himself is oppressed by the military, oppressed by his own inner turmoil as he wages the greatest war…the war waged within ourselves. 

4. Here we go, ad infinitum.
·        Allusion: “"But shouldn't they still act like children? They aren't normal. They act like – history. Napoleon and Wellington. Caesar and Brutus." (pg. 110) Colonel Graff connects historical figures of war to that of the battle academy students, an allusion if I’ve ever seen one.

·        Metaphor: “Like children fighting with grown-ups.” (pg. 122) Ender’s comment is a metaphor for how humans look whilst waging a futile war against the ultimately much more advanced Bugger aliens.

·        Theme: "Peter, you're twelve years old. I'm ten. They have a word for people our age. They call us children and they treat us like mice." (pg. 62) Connotes the theme of manipulation as Ender discusses with his brother that the adults don’t perceive the students as children but as tools, wepons of war, means to their own ends.

·        Metaphor: “Out of the woods emerged a dozen slavering wolves with human faces. Ender recognized them – they were the children from the playground. Only now their teeth could tear; Ender, weaponless, was quickly devoured.” (pg. 69) The children are as vicious as any animal as they visibly plot/prepare to get revenge on Ender in this metaphor of the cruelty any human being, even a child is capable of.

·        Simile: “For a moment, as Ender looked around at the laughing, jeering faces, he imagined their bodies covered with hair, their teeth pointed for tearing as if like wolves. Am I the only human being in this place? Are all the others animals, waiting only to devour?” (pg. 103) As if like wolves or animals, Ender ponders yet again on how savage another human being can be in this revealing/evocative simile/metaphor.

·        Symbolism: “This is war. To them, this was a game.” (pg. 84) The simulation of war that the kids are frequently subjected to is a persistent symbol for the short-sided perspectives of the students as well as agendas of the adults.

·        Theme: “As a species, we have evolved to survive. And the way we do it is by straining and straining and, at last, every few generations, giving birth to genius. The one who invents the wheel. And light. And flight. The one who builds a city, a nation, an empire.... Human beings are free except when humanity needs them. Maybe humanity needs you. To do something.” (pg. 35) Details the theme of freedom, how Ender must fight for his species, humanity’s freedom at the cost of his very own.

·         Simile: "There were TV cameras, perched like animals on the shoulders of crouching, prowling men." (pg. 28) A simile describing the incessant paparazzi, again likening man to animals, as they attempt to take photos of the new “genius” recruit, Ender.

·        Theme:It’s the teachers, they’re the enemy. They get us to fight each other, to hate each other. The game is everything. Win win win. It amounts to nothing.” (pg. 108) Manipulation of children via the adult commanders, their myopic perspective plays to the theme of perspective in the novel as Ender continually argues on who truly is the enemy in this war for “life”.

·        Irony: “Right now is the time when I can shape events. The world is always a democracy in times of flux, and the man with the best voice will win.” (pg. 130) A metaphor utilizing the concept of democracy ironically as the Valentine (Ender’s sister) describes how she alone can “shape events” and that “the man with the best voice will win” as in an individual, not a democracy, has the capability to make fundamental changes for the whole, the group.

·        Tone: “I’m trapped here, Ender thought, trapped at the End of the World with no way out. And he knew at last the sour taste that had come to him, despite all his successes in the Battle School. It was despair.” (pg. 141) As described earlier, the tone of Ender’s Game is oppressive, dreadful, a sense of despair marauding over the work as Ender prepares to battle for humanity’s survival, at the cost of another species own.
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CHARACTERIZATION_QUESTIONS_
1. Describe two examples of direct characterization and two examples of indirect characterization.  Why does the author use both approaches, and to what end (i.e., what is your lasting impression of the character as a result)?

2. Does the author's syntax and/or diction change when s/he focuses on character?  How?  Example(s)?

3. Is the protagonist static or dynamic?  Flat or round?  Explain.

4. After reading the book did you come away feeling like you'd met a person or read a character?  Analyze one textual example that illustrates your reaction.
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Direct Characterization

·        EXAMPLE 1:

·        “Not a joke, a game. I can make you guys believe anything. I can make you dance around like puppets." - Bonzo

·        EXAMPLE 2:

·        “"Individual human beings are all tools, that the others use to help us all survive." – Col. Graff.

Indirect characterization

·        EXAMPLE 1:

·        “He held up a limp hand. "See the strings?"” –Ender

·        EXAMPLE 2:

·        “Ender felt sick. He had only meant to catch the boy’s arm. No. No, he had meant to hurt him.”

“Any writers worth their royalties utilize both direct and indirect characterization.” – Hayden Robel after answering this question in five other analyses…

In other words, like all great writers, Orson Scott Card so too utilized both direct and indirect forms of characterization to develop his characters/reveal their respective perspectives. Example one (direct) directly characterizes Bonzo, Ender’s company officer, as a cruel, manipulative commander utilizing the kids as tools like puppets. Example one of indirect indirectly characterizes Ender’s own concession to this fate (like a puppet as he references strings), feeling helpless, like a puppet, lacking any freedom or salvation from his condemnation in Battle School. Graff in his perspective direct characterization (ex. 2) comments/fleshes out his own character as he, like most of the adults, perceive the children as tools, mean to an end, nothing more, nothing less. It could be argued that indirect example 2 is a direct characterization of Ender but I personally believe the emphasis on ambiguity/connotation here indirectly connotes the protagonist’s inner turmoil as he injuries a threatening student, even if it was necessary to protect himself he didn’t want to hurt anyone, while at the same time he realizes it was vital to assert that others could not just simply “walk all over him”.

2.
·        “Ender spread his hands over the child-size keyboard near the edge of the desk and wondered what it would feel like to have hands as large as a grown-up's. They must feel so big and awkward, thick stubby fingers and beefy palms.”

·        “You're wrong, Ender. You think you're grown up and tired and jaded with everything, but in your heart you're just as much a kid as I am.”

As exhibited above, Orson Scott Card’s tone/syntax remains oppressive while all the while deliberately childlike in diction, the author intentionally utilizing simple, laymen words so to effectively communicate the novel thru a child’s voice, however “jaded” Ender and the children of Battle School might be.



3. Though I absolutely despise the generalizations, the “all in one bag” terms of “static” or “dynamic” characters, Ender is indeed a “dynamic protagonist” in the traditional definition. Immersed in internal turmoil, Ender shifts back and forth, dynamically changing from a sometimes naive/innocent child to an altogether brooding, cynical adult in disposition and perspicacity. OSC presumably intentionally wove his own theme of duality and humanity’s capacities, facilities for “good” or “evil” acts into Ender as the protagonist can both at times be a lone light in the darkness or that hand snuffs the candle flame out (say, for example, saving the last remaining egg of an alien species or destroying it). 

4.
·        "Ender leaned his head against the wall of the corridor and cried until the bus came. I am just like Peter. Take my monitor away, and I am just like Peter.”

Peter (though Ender’s brother) is the antithesis, the manifestation of all things Ender fears. Cruel and relentless, Peter isn’t evil, nor is he good in any sense, but, rather, grey, “pure”, without morality. Ender despises this facet of his sibling and when he “accidentally” injuries another kid (though, for Ender’s sake, the kid was a bully threatening him) Ender realizes that he could (and does later in the novel), that he has the capacity to be Peter, committing such cruel acts as his brother. Crying, shedding sincere tears for what he has done, the emotional authenticity, actual, genuine, real and true remorse, guilt for his actions validates Ender as not a character but the essence of a person, the captured quintessence of human being imbued with a conscience (unlike the unrealistically Manichean/Machiavellian Peter), imbued with emotions, with imperfections, imbued with the capacities for good, for evil, for either and neither one at all. What more is man? Something great, something hopeful, Something flawed that can only ever be.

Friday, January 25, 2013

LIT TERMS 31-56 (Dialect to Free Verse)



  • Dialect: the language of a particular district, class or group of persons; the sounds, grammar, and diction employed by people distinguished from others. 
 
Very interesting conversation (at lest to me as a writer)



  • Dialectics: formal debates usually over the nature of truth.

  Another interesting vid, a dialectic of our increasingly grey modern times if you will.


  • Dichotomy: split or break between two opposing things.

 An example of biological dichotomy. The male peacocks has color in order to impress the bland female.


  • Diction: the style of speaking or writing as reflected in the choice and use of words.

 

  • Didactic: having to do with the transmission of information; education.

 "Didactic" transmitting tips on how to pass the AP exam. Not necessarily a bad thing all the time.

  • Dogmatic: rigid in beliefs and principles.

 

  • Elegy: a mournful, melancholy poem, especially a funeral song or lament for the dead, sometimes contains general reflections on death, often with a rural or pastoral setting.



  • Epic: a long narrative poem unified by a hero who reflects the customs, mores, and aspirations of his nation of race as he makes his way through legendary and historic exploits, usually over a long period of time (definition bordering on circumlocution).

ex. Beowulf

  • Epigram: witty aphorism.

 

  • Epitaph: any brief inscription in prose or verse on a tombstone; a short formal poem of commemoration often a credo written by the person who wishes it to be on his tombstone.

 

  • Epithet: a short, descriptive name or phrase that  may insult someone’s character, characteristics

 

  • Euphemism: the use of an indirect, mild or vague word or expression for one thought to be coarse, offensive, or blunt.

 

  • Evocative (evocation): a calling forth of memories and sensations; the suggestion or production through artistry and imagination of a sense of reality.



  • Exposition: beginning of a story that sets forth facts, ideas, and/or characters, in a detailed explanation.

 Prologue to HP. I've been on a Harry Potter kick as of late.


  • Expressionism: movement in art, literature, and music consisting of unrealistic   representation of an inner idea or feeling(s).


 The Scream by Edvard Munch, one of the most notable expressionistic paintings/works.


  • Fable: a short, simple story, usually with animals as characters, designed to teach a moral truth.

 Slow and steady wins the race.


  • Fallacy: from Latin word “to deceive”, a false or misleading notion, belief, or argument; any kind of erroneous reasoning that makes arguments unsound.

 

An example of a logical fallacy.
  •   Falling Action: part of the narrative or drama after the climax.

 
 Don't fall!


  • Farce: a boisterous comedy involving ludicrous action and dialogue.

I don't even know....


  • Figurative Language: apt and imaginative language characterized by figures of speech (such as metaphor and simile).

 
 The pyramid of figurative language.


  • Flashback: a narrative device that flashes back to prior events.


 Citizen Kane, the much lauded "greatest movie of all time" also makes great use of figurative devices.


  • Foil: a person or thing that, by contrast, makes another seem better or more prominent.

 

  • Folk Tale: story passed on by word of mouth.

 


  • Foreshadowing: in fiction and drama, a device to prepare the reader for the outcome of the action; “planning” to make the outcome convincing, though not to give it away.



  • Free Verse: verse without conventional metrical pattern, with irregular pattern or no rhyme.
 

Friday, January 18, 2013

LIT TERMS (25; Analogy to Denouement)



  • Analogy: a comparison made between two things to show the similarities between them

     


 


  • Analysis: a method in which a work or idea is separated into its parts, and those parts given rigorous and detailed scrutiny


 ex. http://hrobelrhsenglitcomp.blogspot.com/2012/12/literature-analysis-5-cannery-row-by.html


  • Anaphora: a device or repetition in which a word or words are repeated at the beginning of two or more lines, phrases, clauses, or sentences


 about 1:00 minute into the video

  • Anecdote: a very short story used to illustrate a point

 


  • Antagonist: a person or force opposing the protagonist in a drama or narrative

 


 Bowser, the bete noire of Italian plumbers since 1985
  •  Antithesis: a balancing of one term against another for emphasis or stylistic effectiveness

  

Bowser is to Mario, as the Wicked witch is to Dorothy

  • Aphorism: a terse, pointed statement expressing some wise or clever observation about life

 

 

Indeed.

  • Apologia: a defense or justification for some doctrine, piece of writing, cause, or action; also apology


Defending the rights to bare arms...or should this go under fulmination...

  • Apostrophe: a figure of speech in which an absent or dead person, an abstract quality, or something inanimate or nonhuman is addressed directly


Hamlet, portrayed by  Kenneth Branagh, addresses the skull of "Yorick" the deceased (aka Ophelia....) . Also feature Billy Crystal, god of comedy.

  • Argument(ation): the process of convincing a reader by proving either the truth or the falsity of an idea or proposition; also, the thesis or proposition itself


 Explains the concept better then i could ever describe :)

  • Assumption: the act of supposing, or taking for granted that a thing is true


 Get your minds out of the gutter...

  • Audience: the intended listener or listeners


 A First-Person-Shooter game made for mature, 18 and up year olds...but this is not the intended audience...(skip to 6:00 minutes in after you get the point)

  • Characterization: the means by which a writer reveals a character’s personality


 Simple. Short and sweet.

  • Chiasmus: a reversal in the order off words so that the second half of a statement balances the first half in inverted word order

 


  • Circumlocution: a roundabout or evasive speech or writing, in which many words are used but a few would have served

 


  • Classicism: art, literature, and music reflecting the principles of ancient Greece and Rome: tradition, reason, clarity, order, and balance


Details various mediums of classicism. an instant study classic!...I'll stop...

  • Cliché: a phrase or situation overused within society


 
This video is anything but.

  • Climax: the decisive point in a narrative or drama; the pint of greatest intensity or interest at which plot question is answered or resolved

  

The "dramatic structure". This is everything the video above wasn't...

  • Colloquialism: folksy speech, slang words or phrases usually used in informal conversation

  

What.

  • Comedy: originally a nondramatic literary piece of work that was marked by a happy ending; now a term to describe a ludicrous, farcical, or amusing event designed provide enjoyment or produce smiles and laughter


Billy Crystal everybody. (Ten internet points for following up on a reference right?)

  • Conflict: struggle or problem in a story causing tension


 Robin Williams everybody. Not the word above...

  • Connotation: implicit meaning, going beyond dictionary definition

 

 

so too busy work....

  • Contrast: a rhetorical device by which one element (idea or object) is thrown into opposition to another for the sake of emphasis or clarity

  

Black or White? Good or evil? NO SPOILERS! You will have to watch Lost to find out

  • Denotation: plain dictionary definition

  

for more, read a dictionary.

  • Denouement (pronounced day-new-mahn): loose ends tied up in a story after the climax, closure, conclusion

    (In other words an epilogue.) better than Twilight...

Thursday, January 17, 2013

POETRY ANALYSIS

  (Poems collected from: http://stielaprbhs.weebly.com/20-must-read-poems-for-ap-lit-students.html)

My Last Dutchess by Robert Browning

  • Paraphrase: In essence Robert Browning's "My last Dutchess" reflects on the life/character of the eponymous woman. Via a recount of a painted portrait, the narrator details his own amorous ties to the girl before her passing.
  • Purpose: A nostalgic reflection is the "purpose" of this poem. (as far as i could extrapolate) Nearly a memoir of sorts highlighting the good as well as bad qualities the Dutchess possessed whilst alive.
  •  Structure: Utilizes a rhyming couplet structure, the end of one sentence almost always rhyming the last word of the next.
  • Shift: From the intro only positive traits delivered by romanticizations of the Dutchess were present, but, by the mid/end the tone shifts alongside the positivity as the negative aspcts of the dutchess are described.
  • Speaker: An unidentified narrator (possibly Robert Browning himself?) that had many a romantic relationship with the Dutchess.
  • Spelling/Grammar/Diction: Old English. Utilized what we would dub "archaic" conjunctions/quixotic diction.
  • Tone: nostalgic
  • Theme: To be honest, didnt really discern a particular theme, whether it be a nostalgic ramble or a parable on adultorous turpitudes, i wouldnt say there was a distinct "theme"


I felt a Funeral, in my Brain, by Emily Dickinson


  • Paraphrase: Umm... Yeah...Very, very, incoherent.... I suppose the poem is a metaphor for not genuine mortality, but death by life's  mundanity, maybe? (?) really couldn't give you a summary of what i jut read.
  • Purpose: See paraphrase; My suspicions lend to a metaphor for how mundane life has essentially made for the narrator a type of living death....
  •  Structure: Utilized four sentence quatrains; Free verse
  • Shift: None, none that were telligble i could read really...remained consistently ambiguous and laced with blatantly loaded connotations
  • Speaker: Emily Dickinson herself possibly, a commentary on the (theme)
  • Spelling/Grammar/Diction: Stream of conscious style, its cerebral tone/peculiar and somewhat haunting choice of words definitely supports my
  • Tone: Melancholic, haunting, cerebral the buzzwords go on and on.
  • Theme: As i said previously if i had to salvage my own conception of a theme from this poem it would be that of the mundanity, exacerbating lethargy, of life without dreams, greater ambitions for improvement, pursuits, etc. leads to a sort of living death, a walking huk alive but dead. A funeral being commenced in your brain...


‘Out, Out—’ By Robert Frost

  • Paraphrase: A boy working long by sunset, no breaks, no buts, diligently saws timber, by accident slipping and seriously injuring himself with the machinery. His arm is then amputated, the boy and the poem ending with the child passing into unconsciousness.

  • Purpose/theme(they are essentially the same...): What I perceived the purpose of this piece was a commentary on the loss of childhood/innocence as adulthood/labor rears its ugly head. (as supported by the tectual language/ambiguous/apathetic reactions of the doctor/adults, almost as if pain such as this was inevitable a fact of life)
  •  Structure: Relatively modern pacing/free verse
  • Shift: The first third of the work is a vivid pastiche nearly, painting some beatuiful mountain imagery, but, transitions to dark, unexpected reality as the boy is injured and goes thru his operation.
  • Speaker: unidentified; omniscient observer/re-teller
  • Spelling/Grammar/Diction: Modern grammar/structure and diction, the use of vivid imagery/personification/symbolism of the saw really complemented my interest in this poem.
  • Tone: Initially romantic in its rural descriptions of the surrounding ranges/the boy's hard sawing, the poem shifts to a dark/grim tone towards the end after the boy is injured/operated subsequently.



Ozymandias by Percy Busshe Shelley


  • Paraphrase: The poem recounts a story (from the mouth of another traveler; from an "antique") about a statue crumbling in the desert, constructed by a disgruntled sculptor (apparently never appreciated for his masonry prowess)  by the name of "King Ozymandias".
  • Purpose/Theme: "Nothing beside remains. Round the decay Of that colossal wreck, boundless and bare,The lone and level sands stretch far away." this excerpt illustrates my perception of this given poem's theme/pupose as it comments on the ultimate equilibrium of life (mortality delivering all to the same end, thus the disgruntled sculptor lives on thru his statue, much longer than those "ridiculed him"), of mankind as well as impotency of the species in the grand stretch of nature as nothing, even the statue, now decaying and crumbling, will forever remain.
  • Structure: Sonnet/Iambic pentameter
  • Shift: Begins with a two line intro then shifts to bombastic language/fulminations as the Ozymandias statue scripture is quoted
  • Speaker: unidentified though presumably the author "retelling" (embellishing/fabricating more likely) a story told to them by a traveler
  • Spelling/Grammar/Diction: Old English (lol basket word categorization I'm aware); grammar is definitely influenced by the Shakespearean days of yore, ye might need read a dictionary for thou'st understandeth. Diction is rather "modern" though.
  • Tone: odd; wasn't necessarily imbued with a recognizable tone beyond the bombastic quoting of the structure inscriptions

 Those Winter Sundays by Robert Hayden



  • Paraphrase: A son reflects on his father's compassion/dedication to the son/family as the father, even on those cold, winter Sundays would rise for work early in the morn to provide (not exactly identified what he is actually providing)  for his family. The son not able to truly appreciate or maybe even understand until his father, who he loved, was gone (maybe lived in a troubled home/ had a turbuluent upbringing?...)
  • Purpose/Theme: Taking in the tone/literal in too account, I ruminate that the theme is appreciation/recognition for those who have provide for you, helped you, raised you, loved you unequivocally, like your parents :) to realize how much they have done for you and thank them before its too late.
  • Structure: Didn't follow a particular structure that we have been made familiar of in class; Free verse maybe?
  • Shift: Remained consistently "blue and cold" thru-out the work
  • Speaker: Presumably Robert Hayden; or a son of the work's depicted father
  • Spelling/Grammar/Diction: Modern; In terms of grammar it was executed coherently (no old Elizabethan conjunctions or structures here!); Modern diction too boot!
  • Tone: "Blue"; not despondent nor "cold" in the traditional sense but "winter blue" would be the jine se qua mood/tone summoned, evoked within me while reading. It was dark by any means but it did seem guilty, if not regretful as a son seeming to recount/appreciate his father now gone.






Tuesday, January 15, 2013

LIT TERMS 1-5


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Allegory
a work that functions on a symbolic level.
The Chronicles of Narnia by C.S. Lewis is frequently cited as the epitome of allegorical undertones as the author imbued this particular work with religious, christian, symbolism. Such as the white which being all that is evil (the Devil) and Aslan the commanding lion (god is depicted in many works as a lion) of the armies of good and holy.

Allusion
a reference contained in a work. 

Family guy is notorious for its panoply of allusions and references. Nearly an (wait for it) ALLEGORY in its various comedic levels. (video courtesy of YouTube user StrawberryFae)


Alliteration
the repetition of initial consonant/ sounds. 


 As a writer there are various technical minutia that I absolutely adore and often times implement ad nauseum, alliteration such a beast. God i love nerding out with a good allegorical allusio...nary alliteration!
Ambiguity
the multiple meanings, either intentional or unintentional, of a word, phrase, sentence, or passage.
Ever watched a movie, sat on the edge of your seat, popcorn spilling from your anxiety clenched lap?! Then an ending like above happens....I personally love ambiguity but only if executed correctly and not for spectacle shock value. The ending to Stanley Kubrick's precocious magnum opus is not only a masterwork of cinema but so to the principle of ambiguity. Don't quite understand the video/ending?! Exactly the defintion of ambiguity.


Anachronism

something or someone that is not in its correct historical or chronological time, especially a thing or person that belongs to an earlier time
A dinosaur in modern New York! A knife in a gun fight? An iPhone 4s! Anachronisms are generally utilized in literature and media in general as comedic relief or to create the childhoods of mid 90s kids (like me!) with the greatest T.Rex of all time: JOHN GOODMAN.